English grammar refresher

[katster]

The software contains user and group management and error tracking.

Is that punctuated correctly? I think it is, but my English grammar fu is failing me this morning.

Comments

[crossfire.livejournal.com]

Yeah, it's right, but you're running afoul of cognitive issues with nesting your and's. Simple reversal of terms will clarify:

"The software contains error tracking and user and group management."

[lirazel.livejournal.com]

Or even, "The software includes/ gives administrators tooks for/ user management, group management, and error tracking." Or, "With this software, authorized users can track errors and manage both user and group (what--access? identity? permissions?)

Because except in very specific circumstances, software isn't a container of anything.